r/comic_crits • u/Obartenthusiast7 • 18h ago

Tried to make a shoujo manga-style page

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Here's a single page I made. I tried to make it look similar to a shoujo manga page (though the art-style here doesn't seem quite like that). This is meant to be read right-to-left.

Would love feedback on this, particularly the paneling & artwork.

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