Ok, I am one of many adding to the discourse of TPD but y'all. Am I the only one who thinks it was a poorly written 'Bride' fanfic??
Bride is my absolute favorite book right now. I love the world building, I love the characters, I love how believable their relationship develops. This book... disappointed me.
Hear me out on the similarities: FMC is a sassy woman with lilac eyes. She is doing everything out of obligation to her family (mostly her father) but she has a secret side hustle. She has ulterior motives for her arranged marriage because she wants to save her sister. She marries a "wolf" in an arranged marriage and travels to an unsafe environment for her. The "wolf" is the leader of his pack and wants to overthrow/kill the father of the FMC. The borders are under attack. The father created dissent and chaos to be the dictator. The FMC finds an unlikely ally in her brother.
I mean, come on. Too fucking similar for my taste. However, where the similarities end is the plot and pacing of the love.
Putting the issue of consent aside, why the fuck was the MMC so stupid?? Every chapter from his POV was like, "I want her to trust me. I need her secrets. But I'm going to be super secretive and keep doing shit that makes her distrust me. Ugh, why won't she trust me yet??" Bro was pissing me off! What would it have cost him to tell her about the hunt? The marriage rituals? Of course she would be curious?!? But then he jumps and tells the huge secret of his family well? I don't get that at all. If you want her to trust you, why not just be open and honest about what she could expect and then keep some things closer. And he doesn't seem to care that he's obeying his father with very little information about some things? Killing Gaven was so unnecessary too. He was starting to get his trust.
Subplots that I think should have either been left out or flushed out: the vampire stuff-literally unnecessary and didn't add anything but confusion; the drained evolving- that could have been a whole book on its own; her being Poison Vixen- that pathetically fizzled out but I think it would have made for a great book; her incurable pain- felt like she had to be disabled with an invisible illness because that's the popular thing now and I hate it; the whole thing of her seducing Stephan- it was confusing and too complex to make sense; the gods and how they worshipped them-it was tough to keep track of them and their origin story. It felt like there were so many hoops that had to happen for her to get breadcrumbs of info. For example, the "safe" room was a whole chapter or so and had to be added to the storyteller chapter just so that she could find out he was a vampire. Idk but it just felt like too much information thrown at us for each of the subplots but some of them needed to be less complicated.
I feel like I can go on and on. I might just add to this post as I remember things lol
All of that said, I bawled at the scene where she talks to Aidia. Omg I can't remember the last time a book made me cry like that. I've known that heartbreak of saying goodbye to family members before and it was the only scene where I really felt her pain.
Overall, I would not read it again. I almost DNF'd it but I'm stubborn. I don't care about the spice. It wasn't my cup of tea but I feel like all the reviews I read talk about it and it's just going to be a source of contention. I'd like to know thoughts on the other points I brought up.
Also, please forgive any typos- this is a 3AM rant lol
Reposting in hopes that I have enough Karma now 🫠